Story Collage Critique

This class critique was really helpful in seeing what my picture needed. Looking at the four responses I got I can see what aspects of the picture each person noticed and, what parts of the image all four felt improvement was needed. In Terms of improvement I noticed that all four felt the background was somewhat bleak. Adding clouds and the sun would help make the picture more lively and realistic. Also adding a ball, score board, or emotions in the face would help clarify what is going on and give some background to the story. In terms of the positive feedback I got a lot on the players. I think the best feedback was on clarification and making sure I put something into the picture to help show what is happening.